It's A Start...
This isn't my final illustration of Ferdinand. I am going to be asking for feedback from peers to see what can be improved and/or added/subtracted from it. Once I get the feedback I need, I will fix it and eventually start creating the GIF along with it.
Peer Feedback
- foreground grass texture seems too distracting
- foreground grass texture works well in creating depth
- add some tone to the bull so it doesn't look too flat
- decrease the weight of the strokes on the bull
- get rid of some of the little flowers
Revisions
Originally the illustration was 8.5x11 inches. I changed it from one page to a spreadsheet of 16x10 inches. I am planning on putting the text on the other side of the page.
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| This one has the text in the illustration. |
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Added a shadow to the cow, and this is what the final illustration looks like.GIF |
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